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Oct 6, 2005 22:07:20 GMT -5
Post by evilnames on Oct 6, 2005 22:07:20 GMT -5
Ya there is a typo. First paragraph is llearn it should be... learn?
Also I think you can drop he and she when refering to the GM and just call it them or they or something (save 4 spaces for more info)
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Oct 7, 2005 5:28:15 GMT -5
Post by oversoul on Oct 7, 2005 5:28:15 GMT -5
Yup thanks for spotting that I though I had gotten it all. It is hard to edit yourself your eyes naturally pass over certain mistakes.
I usually use they in stead of he or she, I don't know why I did that this time.
Bobby
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Nov 21, 2005 11:18:35 GMT -5
Post by ccreel67 on Nov 21, 2005 11:18:35 GMT -5
You've probably found this one. Under "Bull's Eye" the second sentence has an extra "a." The first "a" isn't needed. The sentence is, "Players a get a special bonus that is up to the GM." Drop the first "a" and I'd change "that" to "which."
"I'll be back," C C
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Aug 8, 2007 19:13:24 GMT -5
Post by maxw on Aug 8, 2007 19:13:24 GMT -5
Also, Soul Survivor's got a period at the end of that cannibal adventure. It should be a question mark.
I think.
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